All of your final designs have a clear hierarchy and without even looking at the labels of the designs I would be able to point out the most prominent object. To start with your first design of the symbol the red makes the symbol really pop out from the black background drawling in the viewers eye. I think you could have moved around some of the words in the text so it would fit more evenly all around. The word alpha is in a good position and easy to read. The second design with the display heading being the most prominent has a very clean look to it. The red start of the word alpha brings together the design with the red symbol at the end of it. It looks like the text needs to be moved up just slightly to center it completely. For the final third design the overall representation and placement of things works well. To allow the text to stick out more I would have made that white and made the Alpha and symbol black so they aren't popping out more than the text. Overall I think you did a good job with the design and sticking to the requirements well. ~Rachel Reed
All of your final designs have a clear hierarchy and without even looking at the labels of the designs I would be able to point out the most prominent object. To start with your first design of the symbol the red makes the symbol really pop out from the black background drawling in the viewers eye. I think you could have moved around some of the words in the text so it would fit more evenly all around. The word alpha is in a good position and easy to read. The second design with the display heading being the most prominent has a very clean look to it. The red start of the word alpha brings together the design with the red symbol at the end of it. It looks like the text needs to be moved up just slightly to center it completely. For the final third design the overall representation and placement of things works well. To allow the text to stick out more I would have made that white and made the Alpha and symbol black so they aren't popping out more than the text. Overall I think you did a good job with the design and sticking to the requirements well. ~Rachel Reed
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